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Post by tony h » Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:40 pm

"Eat your dinner". Is not the same as: "Eat? You're dinner!"

Which, in writing this down, makes me wonder how best to mange the punctuation of the speech above. Specially when you add in reporting this as a quotation. eg


My English teacher used to say : " Simon said, "Eat your dinner". Is not the same as: "Eat? You're dinner!", said Simon "
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Re: punctuation

Post by JerrySmile » Thu Sep 04, 2014 12:44 am

tony h wrote:"Eat your dinner". Is not the same as: "Eat? You're dinner!"
I'd write it as:

"Eat your dinner" is not the same as "Eat? You're dinner!"

For the quoted example, in AmE according to the CMOS (The Chicaco Manual of Style):

My English teacher used to say : "'Simon said, "Eat your dinner"' is not the same as 'Eat? You're dinner!' said Simon.'"

With spaced quotes for clarity:

My English teacher used to say : " 'Simon said, "Eat your dinner" ' is not the same as ' "Eat? You're dinner!" said Simon.' "


CMOS
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13.28 Quotations and “quotes within quotes”

Quoted words, phrases, and sentences run into the text are enclosed in double quotation marks. Single quotation marks enclose quotations within quotations; double marks, quotations within these; and so on. (The practice in the United Kingdom and elsewhere is often the reverse: single marks are used first, then double, and so on.)

“Don’t be absurd!” said Henry. “To say that ‘I mean what I say’ is the same as ‘I say what I mean’ is to be as confused as Alice at the Mad Hatter’s tea party. You remember what the Hatter said to her: ‘Not the same thing a bit! Why you might just as well say that “I see what I eat” is the same thing as “I eat what I see”!’ ”
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6.119 Commas with question marks or exclamation points

When a question mark or exclamation point appears at the end of a quotation where a comma would normally appear, the comma is omitted (as in the first example below; see also 6.52). When, however, the title of a work ends in a question mark or exclamation point, a comma should also appear if the grammar of the sentence would normally call for one.

“Are you a doctor?” asked Mahmoud.

but

“Are You a Doctor?,” the fifth story in Will You Please Be Quiet, Please?, treats modern love.

All the band’s soundtracks—A Hard Day’s Night, Help!, Yellow Submarine, and Magical Mystery Tour—were popular.

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Post by Bobinwales » Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:52 am

When I am arguing about the use of commas, I usually quote:

"Let's eat, Granddad".
And.
"Let's eat Granddad".
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Re: punctuation

Post by Edwin F Ashworth » Sun Sep 07, 2014 11:35 am

Peter Carey at the Mindyourlanguage blog adds much more sensible (does that need a comma?) advice about the positives and negatives of comma usage. I'll just mention:

Keith Waterhouse advised: “Commas are not condiments. Do not pepper sentences with them unnecessarily.” Quite so, but a well-placed one is the difference between “what is this thing called love?” and “what is this thing called, love?”
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